http://didntsayeatcake.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] didntsayeatcake.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sixwordstories2010-10-05 10:06 pm
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*Dressed and ready to go hunting*

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
[Seated on his horse, but only paying attention to one thing.]

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
[Here's one more outright stare, although it's not at all disapproving. Louis does look like he might topple off his horse at any second, and he is breathing very unattractively through his mouth, but his half-lidded eyes are unusually bright and a little glassy. She is so graceful; even without her voluminous skirts she appears to float when she walks. And, just as it had at the opera, the world has bent and parted at her very whim. And she does not seem to have any idea that it has done so at all. She is so kind, even reality hopes to please her.]

Not at all, Madame.

[He nods at the unmounted horse beside him.]

Will you join us?

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
[Realizing she has caught him staring, he quickly glances down at his horse's withers. He fiddles with his reins.]

Yes.

[He clears his throat.]

Your outfit is very...appropriate.

[The shape of her body is enticingly clear, and at the same time: she seems less fragile than usual.]

I hope your horse is to your liking?

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Worried?

[He has no idea what his face looks like sometimes. And it's probably for the best.

Louis summons up all of his tact. Every last drop.]

You look...far decent-er than I.

[And then he makes himself very busy patting his mount's neck so no one can see how red he is. His hunting party is very politely ignoring them. They're good men, all.]

She is called Belle.

[And she is so chestnut she is nearly gold.]

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 01:42 am (UTC)(link)
I would imagine so.

[He has no idea how women manage to get around in skirts wider than they are tall. He has enough trouble navigating around his own two feet.

Louis gestures to the rest of the party, and then nods at her.]

Well.

[And then he nudges his horse into a slow trot. On horseback: he beams.]

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 06:22 am (UTC)(link)
[Louis is naturally the opposite of graceful, but his horse is able to be graceful for him, and he revels in that feeling. His feet are not in his way. He knows what to do with his hands. He feels lighter because the horse carries his weight with ease. And he is a good rider. He knows this. And he can allow himself some pride in it.

He watches her out of the corner of his eye, carefully matching his horse's stride with her own.]

Maybe they can fall off together.

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
[A part of him would like to see her as an utter mess: he doesn't believe it possible. He is sure her hair loosens and dirt smudges her cheek in only the most flattering and artistic ways. He, on the other hand, sweats like a pig, and turns blotchy on the best of rides.

As they enter the woods he urges his horse into a canter.]

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 06:23 pm (UTC)(link)
[He does consider her a little mystical. Magic wife: do not touch. She is made of porcelain that his clumsy fingers would break, and frosted with sugar that would melt in his clammy hands.

They slow to a stop in a small clearing. He is panting slightly, but mostly with excitement. A horn sounds.]

A stag has been spotted.

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 07:56 pm (UTC)(link)
[He scans the landscape as well. Although it is a colorful blur to him, he can spot movement. The movement he is looking for is that of the hounds.]

There!

[And they're off!]

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-09 05:14 am (UTC)(link)
[He crouches close to his horse's neck, urging the animal on. Hooves thunder all around them. His eyes are on the tails of the hounds. He guides his horse sharp around curves and over fallen logs. They move like a single being.]

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-09 06:28 am (UTC)(link)
[Her shriek cuts through him like a knife, and he turns in his saddle, even while galloping in the other direction. His horse snorts as he yanks its head violently around, its hind legs scrambling as it turns. He catches her horse by the bridle.]

Are you hurt?

[His voice is high and shrill and frightened.]

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-09 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
[He dismounts and offers her his hand. He looks relieved. And slightly amused.]

Then you have fallen well.

[As good a rider as he is, he does fall off quite regularly.]

[identity profile] kingofawkward.livejournal.com 2010-10-10 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
[He pulls her easily to her feet. He is quite unexpectedly strong. Must be from lifting all of those forks full of food to his mouth. Still holding her hands in his, leans down toward her hat. He tells it:]

You have fallen very well.

[He produces a handkerchief and dabs gently at the mud on her face and in her hair. He seems unconcerned that he may become muddy as well, and he speaks lightly.]

I have lost many stags, and I will lose many more.